Saturday, January 15, 2011
LIFE OF A ROSE
I’m here to tell about my life & my name is “ROSE”,
Known as the symbol of love that you know of course…
My birthplace was a beautiful garden full of flowers,
Just like you I was also born with some dreams & desires…!!
The garden was on the huge street of Mumbai city,
I fell in love with rosy staying in the neighbor's balcony…
My heart was full of love as I was young & fresh & so was she,
The sweet fragrance of her body used to drive me crazy…!!
We used to see each other all the time from the quarter of a mile,
Our feelings were getting expressed with the exchange of smile…!!
One day I decided that tomorrow I am going to ask her out,
But on that same night only the gardener did cut me out…
I was broken hearted & crying a river as i had lost my love,
See the irony the symbol of love wasn’t able to get his love…!!
As a reason to live thought so what If couldn't get my loved one,
I can at least be the reason for someone to get his beloved one…!!
Making that the only aim of my life I tried to convince myself,
Was trying really hard to survive & thought it might help…!!
But all that was just a crap & wasn’t working out for me,
The time was running so bad I didn’t know what’s gonna be…??
I lost my charm & freshness for a rose I had become a big odd,
The gardener picked me up & rudely threw me on the road…!!
The only reason for me to live had gone to the drain,
I was crawling one road & no one could see my pain…!!
A person passing by lifted me from there seeing me half dead,
That is the man whose poems recently you people have read…!!
I had lost all the hopes to live & was felling like a big loser,
He gave me a new reason to live so I really thank that booker…!!
Yes, I had lost interest in life but I have got back the spark,
Today in PARTH’s book of poem I am the “bookmark”…!!
-by Parth Ghadiali
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vinayak...
ReplyDeletenice one liked the irony wala line and the bookmark one the most...;very good keep it up....and by it i mean the good work
nachos...
ReplyDeletebade dis is simply awesum....d bookmrk wala line supalyk...... keep it up bro..
Nice one....!! :)
ReplyDeletesuperb it is.... out of all the poems i think i hv liked this the most.... and i can see as well the improvement in ur work post after post.... gud work... keep it up.... keep getting new interesting topic n keep working on them...
ReplyDelete@vinayak- thanks a lot bro, i was really lookin for a decent enough topic n this came to my mind..n d "bookmark" thing is real, i really hv a dried rose as my bookmark.. :)
ReplyDelete@nachos- thank you chhote, evn i love d "bookmark" line d most...!! ;)
@yashree- thank you dear... :)
@salman- thanks 4 your opinion n i hv to tell u tht d topic u suggested me ystrday, i m gona work on it soon....its gona be my coming up creation for sure.... ;)
ReplyDeleteamazingly rhymed and well balanced in its irony
ReplyDeletegood work buddy
looking fwd 4 more ;)
the abv comment was from me
ReplyDeletepinky ;)
thanks a lot....!!!
ReplyDeletevl come up wid smthng very soon.... :)
excellent work!
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